Captivating all the way but game ended abruptly. Not cool at all
It's honestly disappointing. Either way, I'm giving three stars for the effort.
Too mushy gushy and just overall poorly written
If you want to write a story, write a story. This is not a choices, first person game where you, the Reader, matter at all. It's a trite romantic drama with prompts. Boring.
Death without checkpoints. You can die and have to start the whole thing over again
I wasn't really bothered by the 3rd person POV. What really put me off is just how unlikeable the characters are. The female MC is just the ultimate Mary Sue who is constantly being complemented for no reason, and who is described as "sweet" "innocent" and "pure", but throughout the game, she cheats on her husband (with a man who is also married), kidnaps a baby dragon from it's nest because she wants to keep it as a pet, and admits that she's glad her stepfather was murdered because she never liked him anyway. Also, the two lovers never spend any time actually getting to know each other. They just see that the other person is attractive and decide they're in love straight away. So, as it is, it doesn't feel like I'm reading a story about "pure, unconditional love", but rather a story about two not particularly nice people who have an affair based solely on shallow physical attraction.
Needs a lot of work. I am a fan of the story but it was hard to get into because certain parts were not translated perfectly. This could be a great book but it needs some TLC.
It's one of the best romactic books I've read
Kinda boring and a little complicated.
But buy but already married!